my children

my poems are my children
to set them free to flourish
develop a life of their own
released to the world

always to cherish
cherish their existence
for they seem to develop
a life of their own

many develop their own
meanings of my children
of that meanings they were
written as their beginnings

more worldly they become
more they develop their lives
their growth in the world
to become immortal

 

Reviews

[Phil & Bren's Colla..]

Very well written. Beautifully penned. Excellent job.

[Cece]

i would think most would think of their writing as their children.
what you do with your children put up most care in their creation.
nurture them,
prepare them for the world.
let them loose on the world.
watch them,
protect them.
watch them develop their own personality beyond your creation

[Rain]

I love the way you correlate your writings as your children. I've never view them that way until I read this piece. I came here after reading one of your reviews. I fell in love with your writing, plus your Bio. I'm glad I did. Great work. Rain..

[poddar kushal]

like a spoiled child a poem cries cries for its mama...already moved to creat another

[A.r. Bazian]

i like! i like! i like!
nicely said... and well written!
your techniques confuse me a bit... you've developed a style of your own i think, am i right?
anyway... nicely done!

really good job!
keep it up!