Am I to dream

Now we have had such time apart
I thought of our time together
When I thought I had felt such pleasure
You showed me more 
my memories will not fade

I remember the most
When we lay in bed together
We are too exhausted for more
We just cuddle and slept
Remember our first night of sleep

I know you only speak
of the nights We were fully engaged
Hearts beating hard, blood pulsing
The sweat I felt against my skin
As we moved, it slid easily

I know you only think
Of the nights emotions was exploding
Breathing hard, juices squirting
Felt the cold air rush in to fill the voids
Before you repeat and fill the void

All this I think we shall repeat
When we are together again
I know you are counting the days
For such proposal with a band of gold
Is that a fairy tale to be

Reviews

[Tenten]

it flows better now, a steadier beat and the story doesn't get as tangle in the words at the second read. i still like this.

[Tenten]

the flow gets choppy on the last line but other wise it speaks and its a whisper loud piece. i enjoyed it, your imagery was wicked.