haiku poetry gone bye

haiku is style of poems consisting 3 lines with syllable count of 5-7-5 haiku in japanese has be easier cause each Hiragana is one syllable

soon i am gone bye
this by my own hand you think
it is i think not

soon it is all right
i'm ready to go right now you see
it is i think so

soon i am gone bye
give me the green light right now
it is i think not

soon it is all right
no more two face lovers you see
it is i think so

soon i am gone bye
easy come easy go i can see
it is i think not



 

Reviews

[A.r. Bazian]

i have never been introduced to far eastern poetry, besides ancient script!
not bad at!
well done girl...
keep it up!