Lost

do you ever feel like your slowly fading

away

just one more push, one more day

like your going to break into pieces

that will never be glued back together

just going to be blown away in the

wind

like the seeds of a dandelion

your scared

your mind just goes blank

lost in the wind 

Author's Note

tell me what you think?

Reviews

[C. Rose]

like your going to break into pieces: like you're going to
your scared: you're scared

I like the shaky-nervous, falling apart vibe you portray.

[Ceilidh Hamm]

Thank I worked really hard on that part

[Flightless Bird]

Ohh I love this! :) Like a lot!

[Ceilidh Hamm]

thank you so much