Love Like This

My heart finally trusts my mind,

And somehow I know it's completely right.

You are the beautiful blue sky,

And the breeze blowing through the trees.

You're always with me everywhere I go, 

Your love makes it easier when life gets hard.

So can I call you mine now?

Because you are perfect in every way.

And swear you'll stay with me by my side,

For a whole life time.

I don't care how long it takes.

It's worth the wait,

To wait for a love like this.

Reviews

[bathtime]

I felt like this for such a long time at one point in my life. The feeling when you finally find someone worth loving is an incredible one, beyond words. Your piece is wonderful. I like where you broke your lines and your use of language. Its really lovely.

[Celena]

Thank you! It's such a wonderful feeling isn't it?

[Coyote Poetry]

I agree. True love is worst the wait.
"I don't care how long it takes.
It's worth the wait,
To wait for a love like this."
I enjoyed the positive thoughts and outlook in the poetry. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[alifeacoustic]

Beautiful. So simple, yet complex, that feeling called love.
Thank you for sharing.

[Celena]

Thank you!