Save A Peice

We were so perfect,

But I guess it wasn't enough.

You broke my heart.

All I ask

Is save the pieces

And give them back to me.

Don't ever forget what we had.

Don't ever forget what we've done.

Ask I ask is one thing,

Well two things,

Well now three,

Save the pieces for me,

Save a piece for yourself,

And save for the memories.

Remember me forever.

Never forget.

All you have to do,

Is save just one piece

For you.

Do that for me

And for the memories.

Author's Note

Image by Alephunky

Reviews

[Chidoriflower]

Sums it up perfectly. You'll never forget them...hopefully they won't forget u. Remember the good times and all that. Brilliant! I've read some of your other writings and they're also quite brilliant

[xansizi]

That perfectly describes how you feel when you've been dumped- unless it was bad and you want to rip his throat out. It's very touching and very sweet

[cemily]

Aw thanks. I have dealt with both and this kind is definitely the more difficult of the two.

[xansizi]

Agreed! Much harder when you don't know what went wrong.

If you get the chance could you please review for me? Thanks

[cemily]

I cannot view your account because it is rated mature. Otherwise I would.