My Creek

 Cold

Dark

Stormy

Deep

Not really.

It’s just my little creek.

BUT

When storms are brewing

You should see

How like the ocean my creek can be.

Reviews

[Johnny]

I like how you structured the lines.. I really like the descriptive words you use.. color.. depth..physical and audio.. well made.. you have skills Viola

[Shadowkai]

Simple but amazing, i have seen just how powerful a creek can be during a storm. Your poetry creates such beautiful imagery in my mind, even the most simple of things can have the most complex of meanings behind them. Please let me know when you post new poetry i'd love to read it :)

[viola]

Will do! I just started posting things today. I've been looking for people who are willing to read and critique my writing. This is great!

[Shadowkai]

Good good i can't wait xD