Lingering on the edge

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Lingering on the edge of light

on silver-shining sequined streets

footsteps fainting, falling night      

grafted gardens of colored pleats…

Rhythmic rifts of clouding skies

cadence tripping light the tune

lullen mists waltz olive eyes

I dance her earth and she my moon…

And in the tranquil ruby glimmer

rain descends in mothered pearls

she glides across the earthen shimmer

in seabird songs and lilting curls…

Reviews

[Robbie~xoxo~]

"Rhythmic rifts of clouding skies

cadence tripping light the tune

lullen mists waltz olive eyes

I dance her earth and she my moon…"~ What an enchanting piece this is!... This shines in brillant hues of silver and green.. the olive eyes are beautiful...Magnificent write!

[rnuff]

such poetic ability with a wonderful pic. Stunning write

[Tina Kline]

A wonderful poem here. Nature and love, its what life is all about. You spin magic here once again with your poetry. The images around outstanding creating great visuals. I sure enjoyed reading this.

[Pratik]

This is incredible! Such richness of language... you know how to use your mastery over words Craig! It speaks of Nature and love - how they integrate into one another at these magic moments! Awesome write :)

[Star Wolf]

Very romantic and beautiful...it has a magic about it that pulls the reader in. Awesome poem.

[Ghost of Jupiter]

I dance along with the rythmic rhyme of this glorious piece...truly beautiful dear friend...you never stop amazing me!

[Joel A Doetsch]

Wonderful write, the rhythm really draws you in.

[Craba]

Rhythmic rifts of clouding skies
cadence tripping light the tune

Awesome! Totally amazing write.

[Emma Ruth]

The metre and language here are lovely, and the alliteration in the line - "silver-shining sequined streets"; beautiful to read :)

[MOON]

Beautifully crafted write , dances on the page as usual . Love these lines so
And in the tranquil ruby glimmer
rain descends in mothered pearls
she glides across the earthen shimmer
in seabird songs and lilting curls…