FOR YOU LIKE THE SUN

I want to be for you like the sun on winter’s snow... melting you... transforming you into raging rivers... torrents of spring’s song... a wild fury of crystalline light in trembling, tumbling energy... awakened and unleashed to wonder's land... for you are anything but commonplace... a liquid lit desire only sleeping... when I see the world illumined in your eyes... I burn as the fires of a thousand daybreaks... shattering the powerless fragrance of night within... gaze at me now... let me become for you like the sun... 

Reviews

[Saumya]

..... wow!!! This is Beautiful.....😊

[An owl on the moon]

Ah, thank you dear Saumya! So glad you were by. :)

[Saumya]

You're welcome!😊

[zaisham9393]

One of the most beautiful romantic poems !
Thank you for sharing this :)!

[An owl on the moon]

I so deeply appreciate your kindness and presence in my world... :)

[Coyote Poetry]

Soft, gentle and powerful use of words. Thank you my friend for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

[Valentine]

This is sweet and very romantic. Valentine

[Ardra]

when I see the world illumined in your eyes... I burn as the fires of a thousand daybreaks... shattering the powerless fragrance of night within... gaze at me now... let me become for you like the sun... .... our loved ones are our Sun....it's only their light that shines upon our life's.... I like the way you paint your love into her.....the sunshine filling her with brightness .... I always tell my love that he is the sun of my life and am his moon surviving on his light.... this poetry resonates with me at a very deep level.... happy to read this one....

[An owl on the moon]

I so deeply appreciate your warm thoughts and light here, Ria. My words are more reflections and remembrances of sunlight now, but I am thankful the thoughts still resonate in your poetic heart.

[Adam Adams]

"I want to be for you like the sun on winter’s snow..."
The imagery's full of love. Very philosophical writes you do write. Enjoyed reading your work. I love the scenes you've plotted in this write... 'bout "sun" (you) and "winter" (your love). Seemed like a romantic-lullaby. Well penned.

[~]

To have someone that wants to be like the sun that breaks the cold spells.. who would not want that? Great write!!!

[An owl on the moon]

Thanks so much for stopping by, moonskittles! Appreciate your encouragement... :)

[Seriana]

Oh yeah, MUCHLY!! Craig, beautiful, vivid imagery here. Who needs to say alot of words when you can say so much more in a few. Wonderfully done. Thank you for sharing your heart.

[An owl on the moon]

Thank you, sweet friend! Good to have you by again... Why, you're one of the reasons I stayed here. Now, may love rise so wild and fierce in your spring... and forevermore... :)

[Writer_next_door]

Wow... just wow.
The first poem I read here and it is so AMAZING. Thank you for sharing a talent as wonderful with us.
This was truely WOW!

[An owl on the moon]

AnneMarie, thank you so much! I deeply appreciate your presence.. and your kindness... Happy new year! :)