A story laced in starlit thread

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Star

Severed

Torn in two

The illuminations

Now housed in flesh

Wandering over endless ages

One aroused as a dark dragon’s whisper

The other an awakening woman with woven wings

And both endlessly seeking the other’s light

Both needing to find their way home

In timeless echoes their radiance

Now hunts halcyon days

Lilting movements

Lissome sighs

Converging

Fusing

Star

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Reviews

[daninstockholm]

very cool piece of work,, lovely imagery and superb construction,, love how you weave the images and lines together,,

[An owl on the moon]

Thank you so much for your comments and for stopping by. May your weekend be deeply inspired.

[softlyfall]

Of stardust we are made, our unity sundered...to stardust we return, once again whole. Starlight housed in flesh is simply a stunning and very innovative allusion. Use use evocative, gorgeous words, and I LOVE words!

[An owl on the moon]

Thank you so much for your lifting words, dear poet. This is as much autobiography as poetry, though I guess we mostly write from our souls, don't we? An ocean of words for you to swim in now. :)

[V]

I like how you wrap up the words, like gifts, and make them shine. A sensual piece, really nicely crafted, especially the structure. Smooth in the beginning, restless by the end.

[An owl on the moon]

I so deeply appreciate your thoughts on my whispers here. May your weekend find you dancing in words and silences.

[V]

Thank you :) I do actually have a weekend this time-days off (work)

[Corset]

I have always enjoyed how you weave fantasy with the human condition, this seems a tale of two cities merging starlit.

[An owl on the moon]

So glad to have you by again, dear Corset. Thank you for lifting me with your words. :)

[Corset]

you are so welcome Craig.