I am sky...

Passion of heaven and earth, for the fairest of them all...

I am sky

And you are earth...

Let my winds

Caress your face...

Let my warmth

Roll gently over

Your fragrant skin...

My rains

Fill your rivers

And nourish

All your life...

My voice is as thunder

And gentle as the

Song of birds...

And I would

Cover you,

Guard you,

Caress you,

Forever...

 

Reviews

[DaniElle LaPointe]

Another strong example of sensual imagery. A nice free verse. Although I dare ask... What's with you and elans? ;p My choice of verses, would be the rain and rivers. That is striking in metaphoric value... I hesitate to say just what peaks my liking of it. Anyhoo... In true Canadian form I give this one an "EH"!

[Fanciful Goddess]

BEAUTIFUL!!!! I would have never thought of that, writen the way it is. Its beautiful,romantic,imaginative,
and very very original.

[Anastasia Starlena]

Wow absolutely fantastic. I loved the beautiful way this flows. Absolutely exquisite.

[LisetteCanWrite!]

Wow.. very beautifully flowing... you are life itself surronding one.. which everything rich the world's elements.. very nicely done.. loved it.. thank you for sharing .. you are surely one superb poet!!! =)

[bluessadmood]

yes i liked that ,my rains fill your rivers..so sweet
nice write

[Karen666]

:) my god..... this is my new favorite from you...... you are the best writer on this site that i read....wow...yesss you can fill my rivers with your rain lol

[sarah]

love this:)
greatt job

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Very sweet and uses great imagery. Thanks for entering!

[Tammy]

Lovely..

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

Wonderful play on words when comparing nature and land to love... very different but together they thrive... A very beautiful write.

[-Aurelia Mirella]

Bello!

It could make an lonely person feel loved...

Bene fatto mio fratello caro! :]

Sempre,
-Aurelia ♥