Like amber fire...

You are all I see, my love...

 

Scarlet streaks race in sapphire skies

And all I see are your stunning eyes…

Ashen clouds scatter rain on this space

In this crystal world I see only your face…

Wind rhymes and rifts on worlds within

But all I caress is your soft skin…

The day begins with fierce flame in the skies

Like amber fire, you are my sunrise...

 

Reviews

[Kathy Van Kurin]

like amber fire
an owl on the moon,
This piece reminded of the intricacy with human design.
first line' "scarlet streaks race in sapphire skies
and all I see are your stunning eyes."
The importance of connection and friendship is so lovely!

"Ashen clouds scatter rain on this space,
In this crystal world I see only your face."
Again I see the reward in caring and love.
Love the last line:
"Like amber fire, your are my sunrise....
The whole body of writing was inspiring!
Blessings to you and your life.
Kathy

[An owl on the moon]

Kathy, thank you so much for finding this one! I realize the review prior to yours was from 10 years ago! My soul had a bit more energy for words then. Hoping I can find that energy again. Hope you're having a beautiful new year.

[Curly Grace]

There’s a softness here that lingers, like color moving through mist. Beautifully held.

[Lydia Shutter]

Loved the rhyme scheme in this one. The loving thoughts are enchanting...ultra romantic! Wonderful imagery. Lydi**

[An owl on the moon]

Thank you, dear Lydia! Sometimes words of sweetness can flow from the bitterest dark spaces...

[B]

Being so consumed by a lover
I know the feeling
Like no one in this world exists but that one man

Lovely

[An owl on the moon]

Yes, and that is such an extravagant existence... if only for moments. So glad you know the depth of that kind of love... you never forget the beauty of it... Hope your weekend is bringing you such joy, Nisreenaa. :)

[B]

IT has been quite a gorgeous one

[An owl on the moon]

How perfect! So very thankful for your shining world. :)

[Nautili]

Beautiful..............what a gift for someone to receive such a poem, so passionate, so tender.

[Fran Marie]

The day begins with fierce flame in the skies
Like amber fire, you are my sunrise...


The ending to this short piece sums it up quite nicely~

A love so pure in essence to be compared to the sunrise
how poetic and beauiful in verse~As always I stand in awe
of your talent with words~

Thanks for sharing in the Fire/Ice contest

[-Aurelia Mirella]

There is not much to add, everyone pretty much said it all.

It's a beautiful poem about a love that is so pure and so strong...

It makes me jealous. Haha

Amazing job. :]

Always,
-Aurelia Mirella

[Wildfleour]

Sensual without being crude. Just lovely.

[Wolfwind Words]

Once again you have captured the essence of Love's Beauty with a brilliant display of color and cadence.
All to true, as we sit with in our mirrored world, a crystal shard reflecting our deepest emotions; We remember. Memories of love's bright light that would dance across our heavens, playing with our emotions and leading us to our own EDEN.
Yet, trapped we are. As we can only look, it's our memories that touch.

A wonderful work of art here. I can envision it painted in colors grand on a canvas.

Aaron Maycroft