Like amber fire...

You are all I see, my love...

 

Scarlet streaks race in sapphire skies

And all I see are your stunning eyes…

Ashen clouds scatter rain on this space

In this crystal world I see only your face…

Wind rhymes and rifts on worlds within

But all I caress is your soft skin…

The day begins with fierce flame in the skies

Like amber fire, you are my sunrise...

 

Reviews

[Kathy Van Kurin]

like amber fire
an owl on the moon,
This piece reminded of the intricacy with human design.
first line' "scarlet streaks race in sapphire skies
and all I see are your stunning eyes."
The importance of connection and friendship is so lovely!

"Ashen clouds scatter rain on this space,
In this crystal world I see only your face."
Again I see the reward in caring and love.
Love the last line:
"Like amber fire, your are my sunrise....
The whole body of writing was inspiring!
Blessings to you and your life.
Kathy

[An owl on the moon]

Kathy, thank you so much for finding this one! I realize the review prior to yours was from 10 years ago! My soul had a bit more energy for words then. Hoping I can find that energy again. Hope you're having a beautiful new year.

[John Stussy]

Whoever this woman is you are in love with, she truly inspires you well! Kudos to her for bringing forth such wondferful writing from you.

[ST]

very poetic and the use of such a rich language make this small piece a really big joy to read

[Adela Muresan]

How sweet and sensual.

The imagery is splendid, especially in the last verse :) .

A.M.

[Brette Medb]

Sensual and romantic. The only two words that seem to describe this poem. There was only one thing I found

In this crystal world I only see your face�

I feel like if you put I see only your face it would flow much better. Other than that splendid write.

Brette