Like amber fire...

You are all I see, my love...

 

Scarlet streaks race in sapphire skies

And all I see are your stunning eyes…

Ashen clouds scatter rain on this space

In this crystal world I see only your face…

Wind rhymes and rifts on worlds within

But all I caress is your soft skin…

The day begins with fierce flame in the skies

Like amber fire, you are my sunrise...

 

Reviews

[Adela Muresan]

How sweet and sensual.

The imagery is splendid, especially in the last verse :) .

A.M.

[Brette Medb]

Sensual and romantic. The only two words that seem to describe this poem. There was only one thing I found

In this crystal world I only see your face�

I feel like if you put I see only your face it would flow much better. Other than that splendid write.

Brette