~~~SUNLIT STREAMS~~~

Merging, melting, thrashing, thriving, together...

 

 

Sunlit streams

drifting on in lazy dreams

Merging…

 

Breathless water

the soul’s reflected daughter

Melting…

 

Rocky roarings

Multitudes of water pouring

THRASHING…

 

Whispers spin

Soft as weeping moonlit skin

THRIVING…

 

Beckoning sea

Your life is woven into me

Together…

Reviews

[-Aurelia Mirella]

Ahh, Craig..reading your poems again is like taking a breath of freah air...

I couldn't agree more with Miss Lynne, simply beautiful. :)

Sempre,
-Aurelia :)

[cest la vie]

Beautiful, simply beautiful..

[Slender Smile/Husna Tay..]

Wow....so beautiful....so divine.....
I could just imagine what was going on in ur mind's eye when u were weaving these words together.....:)
Its beautiful......:)

[Essie]

This poem is quite beautiful and makes the scene easily imagined. Personally I think having such powerful words like thrashing, melting, and thriving in a larger font and different color also added to the emotion behind the poem. I absolutely love how the poem was written especially beacause it is short, yet moving and descriptive. Extremely well done.
-Jessica

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The imagery you reflect here is mesmerizing to say the least. A beautiful mixture of nature's finest elements with just the right words to capture the reader. You have taken me on a quiescent and most romantic journey. Very well done.

[Anastasia Starlena]

Beautifully written piece so full of imagery.

[Luna]

Wonderful! Absolutely amazingly written. Such a beautiful poem. I liked it because it was relatively short, but yet it says so much.

"Breathless water

the soul's reflected daughter
Melting�"

Stunning. Great job with this.

-Luna

[Fabian G. Franklin]

This is wionderful, a summer love poem. Delightful, it seems our muses are sharing notes. lol I'm in the throes of summer passion myself; if only waxing nostalgic. :o) Great job on this.

[April Child]

Love is like water, flowing around and over you, carrying you and sometimes seeming to overwhelm and even destroy you. On the whole though the image of love as water is soothing, the storms don't last. Lovely writing!

[Cherry Berry]

This piece is both soft and sensual. Truly inspiring. Well penned.
xox
Cherri