I AM PIECES

For anyone I have ever known…

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

I am pieces

Bits of this

splinters of that

Colored memories

And you are here

Inside me

A fragment of who I am

Not quite me

Without your piece

So many thoughts

Recollections

Faces

Pain

Pleasure

Glued together

They make me

They undo me

They stir me

Bits of tears

First kiss

graduations

Falling

Rising

joy

depression

life

Now please hand me that

piece over there

 

Reviews

[the_stoic]

different acquaintances - different perspectives ! its strange how a person is based on how he is considered by his folks . everyone it seems has a piece of us .. depending on how close they are the sizes vary ..

you have certainly got an artistic bend of mind .. the picture is fabulous and gels together really well with the theme ! not to forget the different fonts used and the color scheme applied

[Sunflower/Sara Kendrick]

Was a delight to read..I have seen these pictures made up of many other pictures and it is so fasinating to view..I am glad that I chose this one to read this afternoon..I enjoyed the creativity of this one comparing the pieces of the picture to how our lives are molded from the people in our lives..Sunflower..

[Ashley]

i like the way it flows

[Alicia Schroeder]

this poem is amazing.. Wonderful write

[NoneOfYourBusiness akaK..]

stunning visual composition~ a divine stained glass deconstruction of self restructuring through poetic flow~an absolute delight! to read and sense~

[Tina Kline]

This is fantastic, its true we are pieces of everyone who has ever been in our life or anyone we've encountered. Love the format you used in this poem too. Great write here!

[Candylove.]

This speaks volumes to me; A brilliant poem. Thank you for sharing. :)

[Loner]

U are a truely gifted writer Craig, love it from the start till
the end...

[Antonio Valentino]

This was fantastic Craig, and so right on the mark. It is true that all our pieces (experiences) make up who we are. And you just handed a piece over to all of us.

Wonderfully written friend.
Antonio

[Tony]

Poetry, artfully presented, with meaning, and, thank you Author, a light breeze of humor at the end.

[Alison]

This is absoloutly beautiful. Your word choice is dramatic yet subtle, the format is simple, yet it draws me in. You're very artistic, in your wording. This is a wonderful piece.