I drowned within a chocolate sea...

But what a way to go... :)

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

I drowned within a chocolate sea

and felt the darkness swallow me

feared the worst; thought all was lost

over my mind such memories cross’d

saw sun’s reflection on the waves

tasty sweetness on my lips I craved

then I drank it down to the lastest drop

such sweet revenge; I couldn’t stop

travelled to a mall, a shop, a store

knew I had to have some more

and when my revelry was done

I smiled, though I weighed ‘alf a ton

now happy I am all my days, you see

for I drowned within a chocolate sea…

 

Author's Note

Grab your swimsuit… you won’t need a towel… Hope you're smiling...

Reviews

[Gypsy Warrior Queen]

I am not a fan of chocolate but this quirky fun piece has given me the endorphins I came looking for ! It feels warm and bright here.. all that shiny happiness from all these giddy souls!Brilliant!

[An owl on the moon]

Now I'm needing to know what you wish more than chocolate... must keep you smiling too! You deserve to be a part of the giddy souls always. :)

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Decadent!

[Jupiter Jazz]

That was cute =)

[John Jackson (El Juero)]

Im am certainly smiling. Hope you saved some for me and the rest of the Chocoholics here at Le' Cafe'. This poem flows like a chocolate waterfall.
A very tasty write...goin' to hang with the Oompa Loompas now...

[emma]

I love this! What a perfectly sweet write.

[sarah]

haha I love this idea yummy! :-) Great write

[Judy Ponceby]

Wow, what a chocolate fix that is! :) Most excellent, yummy, and made me smile for sure :)

[White Ink]

Ohh Myyyy,,,,
i needa chocolate right now!! can taste it already in my tongue..

Great!

[Jola]

Craig :)
Life is like a box of chocolates ... you never know what hit the ...
sweet and tasty poem...

[Sakib]

Nice imagination! I would like to drown within a chocolate sea.