Romeo and Juliet, a new ending

From the secret diaries of the Capulet and Montague.

From unequal blood, lies fiercest hate,
Two families at war. Two star crossed lovers fate.
From past poison hearts, a new love derives.

In a gentle kiss, that's pure,
past poison hearts find cure.
Two families become one, pain subsides.

For Romeo and Juliet, love survives.

 

Reviews

[LisetteCanWrite!]

Oh you really got me here.. I am a big fan of shakespeare and Romeo and Juliet left me speechless years back.. if only their true story could have such an ending.. I will never forget the ending of that story ... I was traumatized by it!!! Love your spin off on it.. a true dreamer with a passionate soul! =)

[~angelalala~]

"For Romeo and Juliet, love survives" how beautiful. such hope & optimism. we all long for them to be able to be together, & you've made that happen. a simple but powerful poem. love conquers all. great write.

[Wildfleour]

I read every request you sent me, but this was my favorite (I just finished doing this play with my students).

[East of Eden]

Man i love your work! There's something freshly optimistic concerning human nature in the pieces of yours that I've read n it's clearest in this piece. You've re-written a happy ending for the star crossed lovers. Epic achievement!