Body, heart and soul

In my eyes you are the most beautiful
woman I have ever known, body, heart and soul.

You're my clear blue sky, on a hot summer's day.
You're my beautiful rainbow after a cooling rain.

Like a flourishing rose opening to the morning Sun.
Like a gentle flower planted in my moist earth.
A tranquil stream, traveling through an enchanting Forrest.

Let me show you how the sun treats the radiant flowers of spring.
You have the face of a radiant angel and your eyes steal my thoughts.
Allow me to cherish you, to shower you with all things beautiful.

Reviews

[Kaitlin W. Blaylock]

OMG! So romantic. You remind me of the knights of old who would romance their maidens...(sorry if that sounded cheesy, it was better in my head). You have the soul of an old poet within you and the words that flow from your mind are so romantically gorgeous, it blows me away. She's a lucky girl to have a guy like you writing for her...^_^

[Prescilla]

the first two stanzas are pretty cliche, but after those i get a really nice image in my head, and it is quite beautiful. good job!