I'm a disease

 

 

I’m a disease

getting under your skin

till you don’t notice I’m in

Pretty soon those words

          not involved in everyday

          vocabulary consume your speech

street, flow, stream, color, beat

          rundown, sound, breathe, beast

I’m a disease

          you don’t know is inside

          heating your  body till burn

 

Author's Note

Cp. 7:56AM Fri 02/15/08 NM Random Beat (Written, Tobi)

Reviews

[Murphy]

Hmmm... I am sure that this is loaded with meaning, as I have read enough of your work to know that you write from the heart. I am a little unclear on what the disease is... may just be me. Overall, I like the flow and beat.