forget to breathe

forget to breathe

A Poem by Tenten

 


When did you forget to breathe?

When did you forget you?

Lost the others; me myself I

Yourself walked out that door

So don’t lose you

                To the deep of society

                Expectations           

                Age and what is accepted

Don’t forget to breathe

Just Breathe.

 

© 2008 Tenten


Author's Note

Tenten
Cp. 11:01AM Thu 09/27/07 NM Sudden thought Inspiration (Written, Lenore)

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Other than a few grammar errors in some places, this was wonderfully written. Nicely done. Enjoyed this.


Great Write
Rayne

Posted 17 Years Ago



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Tenten

Alamosa, CO



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