vision

vision

A Poem by Tenten

 


Flavor taste smooth and rich, the savor of kiss

Melody stream, kiss of butterfly’s tips

Late night lost boulevard moving to street light drunkard chatter

Daunting beat relief a tantalizing scream

Feet keep moving

Freedom reality

Knocking at a door, faceless man answering

True night love as the dollar hits floor board creeks.

Keep coming to ghost touch lips.

I keep coming back to you, never resisting the fervent could you body brings.

© 2008 Tenten


Author's Note

Tenten
Cp. 7:??PM Fri 02/01/08 Jazz festival, lyrics song forced, steady flow (Written, Random Sheet)

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I like the scene that's playing out here. Is it for real or imagined? It plays out like a good memory.
Nice.
never resisting the fervent could you body brings.
this line I wasn't too clear on.
never resisting the fervent touch your body brings. maybe?
or something like that. I just wasn't clear about it but I get the intent of it.

Posted 17 Years Ago



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Added on March 4, 2008

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Tenten
Tenten

Alamosa, CO



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I know me well enough to know that I don't who I truly am and that I deceive myself into believing i have found my way in life. i well away of the fact that i am a contradiction of actions and words a.. more..