sometimes I forget

 

 

Sometimes I forget

 

I won’t let you love me

 

I refuse to be your breaking point

 

Touch me please, I’m begging

 

Sometimes I let it slip

 

Gentles hands can be persuasive

 

Eternal bliss can be found

 

Kisses mustn’t be on the lips

 

Occasionally I remember

 

Cold nights can be warmth

 

Submission is freedom

 

Memories are not a cruel corruption

 

Author's Note

Cp. 12:53PM Mon 03/17/08 Dir en Grey �Kodoku ni Shisu, Yueni Kodoku.� "Itoshisa ha Fuhai ni Tsuki" forcedpushed, sick, tired, useless, alone and lonely (Written, Genesis)

Reviews

[TRISHA]

The simplicity is there once again. This poet speaks for the common person. The person that is shy. The person that doesn't have the ability to express what they feel. The person that doesn't understand what is happening to them. The person that doesn't know who they are. This is an example of "understated" but powerful. Reading this poem makes me feel as if I know you, have mentally touched you, have become one with you w/o even looking in your eyes....NOW THAT IS WRITING! Trisha

[LilyGrace]

Like this. Simple, subtle. Without obvious meaning, easily interpreted in many different ways. Ambiguous, there's the word I want. :) Nicely written, emotive.
LGD