gonna be ok

gonna be ok

A Poem by Tenten

 

 

I’m gonna be ok

I like the way that sounds

With you not by my side

I’m gonna be ok

With this life

I’m calling mine

Its fine, you’re not among us

Cause this is all gonna be ok

In the end of our

‘Once upon a time

Not so happily ever after’

fairytale

 

© 2008 Tenten


Author's Note

Tenten
Cp. 7:57PM Tue 03/18/08 �September Ends� Green Day ok, sick experimental theatre (Written, Genesis)

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It felt good to read a simple, yet eloquent poem that had no large words, no hidden meanings, no long rambling details of something most of us have lost (love). Most of the time simple and direct is best and makes it possible for everyone to relate....using common vernacular w/o the need for pretense.
I applaud you for this poem. I have read it many times...not to figure it out...but just to enjoy it and know that..."I too, am gonna be ok". And like you, I like the way that sounds. Trisha

Posted 17 Years Ago



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Tenten
Tenten

Alamosa, CO



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I know me well enough to know that I don't who I truly am and that I deceive myself into believing i have found my way in life. i well away of the fact that i am a contradiction of actions and words a.. more..