Jealous Love

 

‘I love you!’ you come here and flash another’s words before me. Am I supposed to be jealous.

That was not said. Only ‘I care for you.’ Carried to my ears, the reassurance I request of his voice.

A man to steal your heart from I.

You fell to sleep and my breath lay fading, he brought water to shallow eyes. You where to great a pain to cherish eternity’s length.

Where do you venture this moment?

To dance with faeries and fall in love with the form of human past.

Riddles and lies to stab me.

I sing no lies, weave not tell, only words. Recall it was you that left my side, tossed me behind.

You fall to his arms.

I embrace another’s words. I dream away.

Go off you begin to cause my pain.

And my heart beats without you once more.

 

Author's Note

Cp. 9:20PM Thu 03/28/08 Parmore 9 Random Story, ok, going with the flow, thought (Written, Genesis)

Reviews

[Bear]

This just tells me to, keep on going reguardless, of the wounds my heart has suffered in the past; and never completely recovered from. Awe, the one's that have "left us behind" thinking another was the one... little did they know then, that it would not last for long, and that they would be searching for love, yet again. Oh, the people that we can never completely erase from our minds... a human trait, that if gone, we might not be "human"? Good write... frantic, like we become, when love walks away.
Bear

[Susan M]

I really like this. It reads like something originally written in another language and then sent through a not-so-great translator program - not always grammatically correct but that's where the charm lies.