Fell Into Flow

Fell Into Flow

A Poem by Tenten

 


They fell into a flow

I shall never comprehend

But never say never, ever

It creates a complex

Of uncertainty

And flipping wave lengths

 

So I’ll go the path of saying

I lost a man I could love

Not just, never just,…

Never say never

Not truly lust, that rings true

 

Still, lost a man I could love

Then bathed in tears

Despair droplets of more

Winged beauty came producing

Hands and voices

That touch the soul in blunt wording

 

Care to tell me….

Your truth no longer required

Content in the silence

On the other side of this phone line

I dreamt of calloused hands

And words not your prose

 

I’ll see you later

Don’t forget me,

The memory lingering

 

© 2008 Tenten


Author's Note

Tenten
Cp. 10:00AM Tue 04/08/08 �Come Back To Me� Se7en ok, writing words to the song flow, being ok, just going for it (Typed)

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This is a sad poem.... Very sad... it's hard when you realize that you have lost someone that you could have loved.... Good job at expressing your emotions...

Posted 17 Years Ago


Seemed more meloncholy like. Sad of course but satisfied (or just settling for what is. )
It reads like a sad love song is what I'm trying to say.
nice.

Posted 17 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on April 12, 2008

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Tenten
Tenten

Alamosa, CO



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I know me well enough to know that I don't who I truly am and that I deceive myself into believing i have found my way in life. i well away of the fact that i am a contradiction of actions and words a.. more..