Creation of Truth

Creation of Truth

A Poem by Tenten

 


I loved him
Dreamt of his hands
His lips
Not the lust
No, the passion
His fire
I loved him

 

I could fall for you
The smile

The hands
Not the lust

The passion

The flow like water

I could fall for you

 

 

 

I’ve never lusted
For a man
I never will
Not as I am now
Never needed that kiss
A thieving moment

 

A creator’s soul
That artist mind

A take me sensation
Physical to describe
The only needed inside
A creator’s soul
That artist mind

 

 

She spoke a chance
In late night words
A possibility
For us, her and I

In a lusting sense

In communality and gentle kisses

She spoke a chance

 

 

I loved her
Had her kisses
Her taste
The lust
Yes, that blue flame passion
I loved her

 

The wind moves past
Turning the world
I loved him
I could fall for you
A creator’s soul, artist mind

She spoke a chance
I loved her

© 2008 Tenten


Author's Note

Tenten
Cp. 4:52PM Sat 04/26/08 �Come� InuYasha thinking to the wind, tired, stressed, very twisted and confused (Typed)

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Maybe I'm reviewing this too early in the morning.
This person sounds conflicted but then kinda not.
I take that back.
It looks like a view of two different kinds of loves.
the adoration of skill and the sexual encounter.
Excuse me I'm kinda off a bit.
I like the way this turns and lets the reader know what exacly is going on in the characters mind.
This is cool and just fine for me.



Posted 17 Years Ago



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Tenten
Tenten

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