A Dance

A Dance

A Poem by Tenten

 


They dressed in past time play

Smoked poison greenery rolls

No one spoke I love you curses

For promising lies kept busy nights

Sun watched kisses left burns

On Adam and Eve bodies

Lips giving gracious fire kisses

 

© 2008 Tenten


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Tenten
Cp. 12:33PM Sun 04/20/08 Steps Mix at Prides ok high, words, thoughts (Written, New Word)

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this was interesting; it has an old world flair, I like it

Posted 17 Years Ago
i love it. its put together very well. i like how u played with words in this one. especially, "Sun watched kisses left burns" that is a very great verse. :D



Posted 17 Years Ago

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 Added on April 30, 2008

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Tenten
Tenten

Alamosa, CO



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