its....

 

It’s twirling in rain drops

Letting it cool you in summer heat

Its midnight walks

And 2AM words breathing life

It’s that little escape of society confines

It’s finding the right song after 30 stations

Warm green teas on summer nights

Fireflies and cricket orchestras

Green bowls, Pringles, railroad tracks

Most importantly its love

Flowing to and fro

Like ink pen ticks

And Cinderella tocks

 

Author's Note

Cp. 10:23AM Wen 05/07/08 �No Rain Live� Blind Melon Good Flowing, Distracting Loving (Written, Blue.)

Reviews

[Prose-full]

"Fireflies and cricket orchestras"--genius
and "
"twirling in raindrops"---again..genius

this is one of my favs as well...

keep up the flow...
i love your style......

[*~Imperfectly Me~*]

I really like this piece, it's one of my favorites of yours... The emotions are portrayed very well. I really like this piece my dear...."It's twirling in rain drops Letting it cool you in summer heat" these were my favorite lines... now i just yearn for the rain!