Rag Dolls

Rag Dolls

A Poem by Tenten
"

written in a bit of insanity

"

 

Dancing stitches

Bloody Rag Doll's

Teeth clashing kisses

Let's Play

I wanna Play

With you

If I bite hard enough

Will you bleed for me

Oh my smiles just for you

Just for you this ruined life

Nails leave scars

When they go deep enough

Let's turn the world obscene

In chants of dirty angels

Let's scream

Dead eyes say

Let's Play my favorite game

 

© 2008 Tenten


Author's Note

Tenten
Cp. 3:21PM Thu 05/15/08 'mOBSCENE' Marilyn Manson tired eyes, I wanna play, let's play, lip biting (Typed, House)

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I like this... kind of horny, pained and dark all rolled into one nice little package. :) Nicely written, simple but evocative. I like your alliteration in 'clashing kisses', it sounds nice in my head. :p
Good write
LGD

Posted 17 Years Ago



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Tenten
Tenten

Alamosa, CO



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I know me well enough to know that I don't who I truly am and that I deceive myself into believing i have found my way in life. i well away of the fact that i am a contradiction of actions and words a.. more..