No flow

 

 

there is no flow no form

no proper placing of words

just the attempted confession

of the sealed lipped child

caged inside

trying to speak on deaf ears

wondering was happiness a dream

all we offer in these words

lacking proper methodology

is our attempted confession

 

Author's Note

Cp. 12:50PM Sat 'Mirror Mirror' M2M lonely, alone, saying something just not what I need to say, throat clogged, here barely existing (Typed, House)

Reviews

[TTBoy28]

No method to the madness... A child who can't speak to those who can't hear, that's trouble so say the least. Sometimes, there is a flowing in saying nothing. Even if it's meaningless, it's the sound that flows! I like this piece!

[TLK]

Thank you for reviewing a poem that is more than four years old!!!

[TTBoy28]

That's perfectly fine!