A Break

 

 

I'm gonna give it a break

This anger and hatred

This second best feeling

This'll be my compromise

For my mother

For that dirty man

For my brothers smiles

This will be my compromise

So here's to repression

...or is it new beginnings

Well, for it all

To a break

To a try at something different

And hopefully only a few screams

During the night and alone times

 

Author's Note

Cp. 11:04AM Fri 07/04/08 'You're Dying' Paramore fine, going to try and not hate mother and that man, breathe, not alone (Typed, House)

Reviews

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"..This second best feeling --to describe this this way speaks hugely, i love it..
This'll be my compromise"

"For my brothers smiles--how giving and sacrificing of you..
This will be my compromise"---what a sweet tie..


"To a try at something different
And hopefully only a few screams.."

this is a sweet compromise for your 'write' to feel free within compromise..