I Bite Back

I Bite Back

A Poem by Tenten

 

you say you're gonna bite me
 sink those teeth into my neck
just below my shoulder blade
make me scream
bruise me
make me love it
 
but oh darling...
 don't you know
I bite back

© 2008 Tenten


Author's Note

Tenten
Cp. 6:40PM Sat 0758 NM fine, sudden moment playful thought, i want to bite somebody, hard (Typed, Brads Comp-House)

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Hehe, i like this... as you knew i would... Very playful i think almost everything bites back... A good poem.

Posted 17 Years Ago
I like that. There's some sassyness there.... :)

Posted 17 Years Ago
Is that love nibbles or vampire fangs? I like that ending. It has bite no pun intended. lol

Posted 17 Years Ago

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 Added on September 7, 2008

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Tenten
Tenten

Alamosa, CO



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