sit and watch

for my baby brother and our shared enjoyments

 

 

He likes to sit and watch the clouds go past

Looking out the kitchen window

Starring into purple skies

I like the rain clouds best too

Resting on the counter tops between

The deep sink and badly painted white cabinets

He likes to sit and watch the clouds go past

 

Author's Note

Cp. 8:35AM Thu 08/07/08 NM writing bout aki, tired eyes, fine, tired (Written, Sylph)

Reviews

[John Alexander McFadyen]

A whimsical piece that calls for thought and feeling. You capture a mood in this short piece.

[Glen Yumang Manese]

SEEMS A TIME FOR BONDING HERE...AS YOU DESCRIBE THE IMAGERY OF THE CLOUDS AND THE RAIN AND HOW YOU AND HIM TRANSFER IT DIFFERENTLY...EVEN DOWN TO THE KITCHEN CABINETS AND THE PAINTING IS AWFUL...JUST ENJOYING THE SCENE...