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when he dreamed of demons i imagined the man next door

when he stood on park way benches preaching of gods and glory through his eyes

i thought of the moon, her glow in starlit nights, i thought of cricket songs and pen ink

when he vanished from sight i dictated life by clicks of keyboards and lighters

now moving past those wounded nostalgic eyes

i wonder on new faces hoping for the loves of past to stay present

beyond the stars i dream and hands that mean a kiss

exist in ticks and tocks more than nine and two beyond eleven and seven

to dirt roads and rail road tracks

dancing

 

Author's Note

Cp. 1:43PM Fri 08..22..08 'Love Song' Tesla most an eye piece, fine here i guess, missing people, lone, for everyone i care for, fingertips, breathing but still sad worried twisted noted and missing lots of people ahh damn fucking hormones (Typed, Myspace Blog Brads Comp-House)

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[Glen Yumang Manese]

I LIKED HOW YOU CONVEY THIS...THE COMPARISON IN THE BEGINNING LINES AS YOU TELL US THE STORY AND THEN TELL US FROM A DIFFERENT PERSPECTIVE AFTER THAT...