Candle Light Stream

 

 

By candle light

I dictate

Her beauty

The crickets song my guidance

Scents of dew, candle wax

                the burning wick

                my cigarette

A passing car disturbing peace

This is my world

As the flame reflects in the neighbor’s window

 

Author's Note

Cp. 4:03AM Sat 06288 NM Crickets Song stomach ache, ok, tired eye bit (Written, Sylph)

Reviews

[Glen Yumang Manese]

Here the imagery in overflowing with emotion as quoted in the lines:

The crickets song my guidance
Scents of dew, candle wax
the burning wick
my cigarette
A passing car disturbing peace

The flow and read just gets at the reader quick...as reflected in the last line:

As the flame reflects in the neighbor’s window