Happy

this doesn't flow so wonderfully, advice would be very much appreciated.

 

 

How do I know I'm happy?

Glazed over ojos

There's a smile on my face

Typing with two hands

Cigarette balance in my lips

Lovers kiss

Not minding the packs almost empty

Working with this feel

The world

Singing at the top of my lungs

Loud and off key

With headphones firmly on

 

Author's Note

Cp. 6:45PM Fri 08/15/08 'Like A Star' Corine Bailey Rae fine, happy and glazed eyes, talked to sister, good, writings bits and pieces of Concert (Typed, House)

Reviews

[odhiambo]

thats happiness shared for sure.youve got me trying to remember those singing off key moments in your life.this is a very honest writing.

[Celtic Cat]

YAY!!!!!! I love a nice happy piece!! This is so great. You keep reminding me of me... cut it out! LOL
It's the singing off key thing...hehe...
I'm glad for your happy times.... you deserve every minute of 'em!!!
Also... the cigarette line was great... really pulls me into your scene. Very cool. : )

[Brianna Brie]

This is amusing. The image conjured up in my head of you happy. Splendid! Loved the ending.