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Experimental piece. Let me know what you think!

He saw. He smiled. He laugh. He touched. She kissed. He froze. She moved. He sat. She grabbed. He cried. She finished. He left. She called. He ignored. She begged. He left. He left. He left. She blossomed. He wilted. He wilted. He wilted. He Left

Author's Note

What do you think? Too simplistic?

Reviews

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No, not too simplistic. What would this be like if it were a poem instead?