Raderation

Sheltered like a dream

Eggshell fragility

Any moment broken, silent

Darkness sweeping in like a madman

Bent, warped, anger and rage

Violence blinding your third eye

I will force it open

So the bleeding can begin

Redemption

My third eye is wide open

I see into you where you dare not look

Visions of rape, murder and masturbation

Meld into one

A symphony… call it… Raderation

Your flower has wilted

Become stagnate, a wasteland

A barren void where life once sprang

The dream has been shattered

A rock into the eggshell

It bleeds

Author's Note

I am glad I found this site to post things but am realizing now that I never go back and revise these things. Someday.

Reviews

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Hmm...could be touched up and cleaned up a little bit, but there is a feeling of power behind your words. I like it. It's a good start! Keep it up.