Down

A poem

    Sadness like the water

                                    cold

           Draws me slowly

                                    deeper


    Wraps me loosely in its

                                    hold

         Becomes my bodies

                                    keeper

Reviews

[Jamestown]

Short, and straight to the point. It sucks your sad but nice write, thanks for
sharing and b-blessed!

[g d chalupsky]

Thank you.

Sadness comes and goes. I'm not stuck there, just passing through.