Pretty Bird

Lo lo lonely

Lonely lil bird

Left behind

By all the world

Lo

Le le left

Behind To die

By her own hand

Without a why

 

Lo lo lovely

To pretty for life

Above the violence

Above the strife

 

Rest in Peace

Pretty bird lost

In the open skies

With no hope

Only lies

 

Reviews

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Very songlike; kind of like a soliloquy or lullaby.

Reading on the page as an innocent poem for an abandoned, lonely bird left to fend for itself, this can also be viewed as a metaphorical piece with much deeper meaning and personal impact.

I enjoyed the soothing sounds this poem made when read. A nicely sweet and innocent piece.

[Anna]

I like this piece a lot...I don't usually like the whole repetition thing in poems, but you have made it work well! nicely done!