haiqua

haiqua

A Poem by charlie

summer ends


house paint


twists


into leaves

© 2015 charlie


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Having a dislike for preparation on sanding peeling paint before painting. All I could see are these images of twisted paint peeling from the heat and hence nothing came to mind that may lie underneath. A nice poem to ponder on!

Posted 10 Years Ago


and that multi-colored coat of pain is a beautiful shade of autumn.

nicely done...i think, as Perdition expressed, this piece might get up and walk after me...i won't forget it easily...

j.

Posted 10 Years Ago


charlie

10 Years Ago

I appreciate your time, j.
Fundamentally the piece exists on three balanced legs, gets up and walks after you....last time I checked that be the reason we write.

Posted 10 Years Ago


charlie

10 Years Ago

Thanks for sharing your time, P.

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Added on August 29, 2015
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charlie

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