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every once and a while, I have no idea what I'm trying to say...

And there was that emptiness,

a six-hundred pound gorilla

that encompassed all my sense.

 

In every direction was nothing,

a swamp full with quicksand

which rendered me motionless.

 

Vacuums silenced my tongue,

and with the force of a train

my shouting went unheard.

 

I becamempty nothingness in a vacuum,

an immense, yielding irresistible force

So I wasenseless, motionless and silent.

Reviews

[No use.]

hahahaha, wasenseless, becamempty,,.. this really captures the mess inside of you at that moment you didn't know what you were trying to say. haha. great write

[Dream Weaver]

Beg pardon to Robin, it's called into the abyss...
Nicely done Charles...

[Kesha]

I like this, I mean aren't we all just nothing? No matter what there are always things that are bigger than us, more important than us. I like this alot :) Keep it up.

[Robin]

it is called the abyss