Lottiemae tells her friend Ms. Pleasure about her wedding day

short monologue

Girl, let me hollar at you, my wedding day . Blue and white bells hagging from the ceiling top, a song playing on the record player. You know the one by Larry Graham( ONE IN A MILLION YOU).Harold always told me that I was his one in a million lady, he could love no other.But you know how men are, their eyes get to roaming, and they sometimes let  what's in their pants talk for them. My father walked me down the asile to the alter, gave me over to Harold, and he whispered something to him like "'you better take care of my little girl, if you don't I will hunt you down and kill you'". At the Lover's Lane hall where the reception took place the food was catered and it smelled good until some people tasted the chicken,  the people say it tasted like wood.

Author's Note

tell me do this sound like a monologue.

Reviews

[Ash Morgrimm]

its interesting, but its not really a monologue. Monologues are more what you should picture as someone telling someone off, IE: mommy to bad kiddie or Dr Evil to Batman. Just something that can go ON and ON and ON for FOREVER!! You have the right idea, but you need more feeling into it! That's the key! Produce a feeling you want someone to feel when your having your monologue (or sometimes its easier to call it a rant) and BOOM! you have one! Good luck with it!

[Nancy Lee Shrader]

Great Write!

[Aspiring Angel]

Hi sweetie, I have never really studied form and such but I would say that to me it would seem so. I am really anxious to read your story that is not yet published about the nursing home. I have worked in so many in my lifetime. I hope you are well. ROTFL just got to tell you and in too much of a rush to go into message (sorry) You look so much like a friend of mine that I worked with years ago. Almost identical same smile. You keep smiling and I'll keep reading. (Please not trying to get points here for longer review, just in a rush.) Blessings, Lesa

[Unique Encouragement]

I like it, short & sweet, is this all apart of a book that you are writing?