My Light

Emotions of how I felt at the time.

My Light

Written by: C. Lee Battaglia

My Light has begun to fade.

Then I see her, the girl with braids.

That smile on her face.

Seems to make my heart race.

She says, "Hi,"

I say, "Hi,"

The girl with braids,

Has made my light, shine many shades.

Author's Note

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Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

I enjoyed the poem my friend.
"The girl with braids,
Has made my light, shine many shades."
Those pretty girls can change the tide of living. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[C. Rose]

This reminds me of something they said in the movie "Giant Mechanical Man", about only needing one person to see you to be able to see your own light.

[C. Lee Battaglia]

Thank you... Now I have to watch that movie... :)

[armin]

What I think of this poem -
Spidey says that it's a cool short and nice one ,moreover I liked the beginning and end.
Keep up the good work.

Spidey. ...

[C. Lee Battaglia]

Thanks Spidey!

[Cool Girl]

This was really good! Love can change everything..

[C. Lee Battaglia]

Very true! Love changes everything!

[Lizardo]

Beautiful, its a really good poem
Sometimes the one we love is our light

[C. Lee Battaglia]

Thanks dude!

[Valkyrie Warrior]

Wow beautiful!! I honestly cannot get enough of your work!!

[C. Lee Battaglia]

…XD Thanks for reviewing! I can't get enough of your work also.

[Valkyrie Warrior]

:D!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! My honest pleasure, your work is fantastic!!!!

[C. Lee Battaglia]

I love your optimism!

[Valkyrie Warrior]

:)!!!!! Well I love your writing!

[C. Lee Battaglia]

I don't know what I like more… talking to you or reading your writing?

[Valkyrie Warrior]

I am flattered!