She is Free as The Wind

Someone has me thinking...

She is Free as The Wind

Written By: C. Lee Battaglia

There is a girl she has me thinking of how pretty she makes me swirl but why is my heart sinking? There she stands free as the wind she doesn't have no plans shes free as the wind... She has been down... but now she rises higher then before high above my ground... because all i do is watch her soar She has been a friend a really great one... but no matter what... it'll never end. shes really fun! As i shove the pain I tell my self that this is love and she gets a better gain.

Author's Note

Miss her... Please leave me instructive feedback.

Reviews

[Paavana Varma]

This is lovely! " She has been down....but now she rises higher than before high above my ground becaause all I do is watch her soar" Amazing! Never stop writing..

[C. Lee Battaglia]

Thank you Paavanna! I really appreciate it... can you by chance look at my story the blonde girl?read moreThank you Paavanna! I really appreciate it... can you by chance look at my story the blonde girl?
Thanks that would be great!

[Paavana Varma]

yea sure :)

[Coyote Poetry]

I liked this poem.
"As i shove
the pain
I tell my self that this is love
and she gets a better gain."
If we are lucky. We learn with proper time. Love was near. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry my friend.
Coyote

[C. Lee Battaglia]

Thank you once again Coyote!

[Coyote Poetry]

Was my pleasure and you are welcome.

[C. Lee Battaglia]

If you want to you can look at my most recent things I've been working on. http://www.writerscafe.org/writing/chasebattaglia/1547659/

[Coyote Poetry]

Okay. I will check out tomorrow night. I'm off to sleep.

[lovergirl]

you touched me man ! i feel you , "i miss him too" hh , anyway you're right i Liked your piece a lot , so emotional with just few words , well done ;)

[C. Lee Battaglia]

Thank you... Uh what do I call u? and I know I've asked for u to read a lot of my stuff but if you want to can u read my story The Blonde Girl? and do u have anything u want me to read?

[lovergirl]

you're very welcome , i enjoy reading good pieces;) and i'd love to read yor story and about my writing read whatever you want read (or the ones with a good title hhh), bythe way you can call me Lina :)

[C. Lee Battaglia]

Thanks Lina!