Breaking of dawn

A Poem by Elise

Like the breaking of dawn you blind me with radiance, the ground crumbles without you the sky breaks in weeping streams behind you, when you step into view the ground becomes steady, the sun smiles an explosion of light trees murmur in unison time stands still. Folding into you it all makes sense, like pieces of a puzzle it falls into place. There is no other world, no other time that will ever feel like home.

© 2010 Elise

Author's Note

I know my grammars not the best and I really need to work on it.

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Katie

when you step into view the ground becomes steady, the sun smiles an explosion of light trees murmur in unison time stands still...

What a beautiful piece! Such emotion of love and pureness. I loved it!

Posted 16 Years Ago

Claire P.

i felt like this about someone once, it didnt work out... but i truly hope it does for you.

amazing write, i know how hard it is to put feelings into words, but you did a good job at it.

Posted 16 Years Ago

Nicole

Wow, I really like this. xD
Effin' amazing.
And I agree with "Blake

Posted 16 Years Ago

Tiff-AH!-knee�

awe..

Posted 16 Years Ago

Blake<3

I really like this piece.
"Like the breaking of dawn you blind me with radiance"
I love that as the beginning.

Posted 16 Years Ago

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Added on November 19, 2009
Last Updated on July 30, 2010

Author

Elise

Adelaide, Australia

About

My name's Elise, I'm 27 and I live in South Australia, I haven't written anything in a really long time but I'm hoping be it this year, next year or however long it takes I can escape back into my own.. more..