God gave us...

God gave us a freedom to live,

God gave us love,

God gave us a life,

God gave us people that love us,

God gave us a soul,

God gave us everything,

God gave us a mother to love and to care,

God gave us sorrows,

But he is kind and loving as u see he gave all he had,

but what we gave in return was nothing.....

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

A honest and direct poem. I agree with your thoughts. We are given opportunity and beauty. Few can see the gifts of God. Thank you for the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Urja Gokani]

thanks a lot

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome.

[ron]

I love this poem because you show us what God gave us.
One question...where is the father?

[Urja Gokani]

THANKS A LOT father?

[ron]

Where is the father in your poem?

[Urja Gokani]

god is our father

[ron]

OK i understand.

[Sami Khalil]

A splendid read and write. So much truth in those words. Bravo....

[Urja Gokani]

thanks a lot i really appreciate it :)

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome....:).......