One Week In Hell

I'm hurting

My insides are tearing

And exploding in my body

There's no way to stop it

One miserable week in hell

My stay is long overdue

It hurts and throbs

I want to knaw my arm off

It hurts that bad

Your stomach contracting in pain

All you can do is deal wiht it

Or take the drugs. I took them

No questions asked

Aww relief came with a flash

I think it's over now...

O s**t it came back

One week in hell...

6 days left.

Reviews

[Blank_fortunes]

Very strong writing it kept me throughout thinking that at the end of the poem the pain would be over but it was just day one impressive.

[brainelation]

i can see how this might seem to be about drug rehab...
so glad i'm a guy.