almost tainted

thoughts were whirling

judgment hazed

just having fun

with our last days

 

laying under the stars

with just a few friends

how did i know

all the giggles would come to an end

 

we were saying our goodbyes

and parting our separate ways

until you pulled me down

and begged for me to stay

 

i reluctantly said yes

and cuddled with you on the blanket

but how was i suppose to know

that you had a secret

 

you wanted me to do things

that i wasnt planning on doing

i was forced upon you

well not forced but reluctant

 

it was all good fun

just joking around

but a serious matter

was later unbound

 

i wanted to get up

and i wanted to leave

bout you and your friend

had other plans than me fleaing

 

i felt a hand press me back down

ive never felt so hopeless

so lost

so bound

 

i thought i wouldnt mind

you know... just playing around

but your friend stepped in

and made it to unsound

 

i panicked and grew worried

and sick with nervousness....

how could you let this happen

how could i have been so weak and useless

 

then i saw the light

a light in my best friend

she saved me precious gift and

my light and  more things than i can comprehend

 

i thought you and your friend were different

but i saw through your motives

you wanted to take control

and break everyones devotions

 

that night has come and passed

and i still think about it constantly

i wonder if you know

how much you almost hurt me.

Reviews

[K. Aurora]

With out being blunt, the picture you paint is terrifying and powerful.
It shows clearly how people often wear masks, never revealing themselves till it's almost to late.

I'm glad that you had an angel that day in the form of your female friend.

Men can be such stupid fools.

Good Strong Poem!
Kansas