Her thoughts and love

a response to " If I could tell you about a friend of mine..."

"I think i he thinks he might need help"
she thinks the same.
she thinks your her world.

she knows the pain that dwells inside
she knows how to hide it,

she knows he hides it.

I wish..no she wishes that he could see him through her eyes,

 the beauty the potential the...

Love.

He feels the same as she does,
Knows the feeling of being alone, unwanted, hurt...

Destroyed....

Destruction

Pain.

She tries to open her heart, soul and arms to this beautiful boy,
She wants to show him a world of beauty and magic
a world thats pain free and full of acceptance....

This world is harder to find than she thought.

"he feels like he's bleeding inside,"

She sees the blood trickling out on the floor...
She wants to save him... but will he let her?
She thinks not but does it anyways.

"

I think i

he thinks he might need help" .... she still wants to help.

Reviews

[Hisou_Tenshi]

I really liked it. Very descriptive. The form by which you wrote it in was odd, but pleasantly so. It's wonderful how you expressed wanting to help and wanting to find a world free of pain. Though, I'm unsure of how, if ever, that world will be found.

[Abdirizak Mohamed]

wow i must say, in this poem has alot of means and unspoken words to it and i see how you describe her and her feelings and it was amazing thing to do so nice work.